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It's just longer

It just seems like a deluxe version of your original animation
which you told us already though

Rough

You should make the lines thinner when you draw things, and lines that show speed should be just thick lines, if you use the paint brush tool to draw them, they'll come out crooked. The lip synching should have some tweening involved so it looks more like the mouth is moving, more keyframe animation would work too.

Too slow

The animation was a little too slow and didn't really seem like the main character was hitting the other sticks that hard, some areas there needs to be sound effects like when two sticks run into eachother. Try not to make things too graphic intensive or most computers will view the animation with serious lag.

Hard to hear the voices

Voices were hard to hear compared to the rest of the sound effects

Ep. 1/2?

That was pretty good. Some voice acting might have made it less boring though. And thanks for not making the whole thing like an rpg battle

Unexpected

The art made me think this was going to suck, i was totally blown away by the great animating

Boring

You should animate the flames instead of having just static images

Increase the framerate

Too choppy framerate.
Try to do more than tweening a mouth to do lip-synching

Too short

I really shouldn't be complaining about this but it really was short. I never put credits though so don't worry

Great

As good as the last one

Lobster

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