Chickenfork's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Breakdancing Heart]

At least you know its not great...

Well, you tried and it shows, you draw the heart in a different program or something?

ELEVENT responds:

Heh I drew it on paper and scanned it into Photoshop :P

[pigeonmaster88's B-Day!!]

That's a lot of moving pictures

I think i had a seizure or something. Who's pigeonmaster???

Expectrum responds:

The link to his profile in the author comment serves a purpose :o

[Happy Birthday Mom!]

Sure...

That looked like a days work for the animating, but with your mom around it makes sense that it took longer

CUCCOOLEGEND responds:

Yeah, it was hard cause the only time I would get a chance to work was at night, causing me to lose a lot of sleep on this lol.

Also the way that I animate is that I add rough sketches, for the fbf parts, go back and redraw over the sketches, then I go back and color, and then I go back again and add finishing touches. So yeah, it takes a lot longer than what it looks like. :P

[Animation: The Mathmatics]

Helpful

Simple but explains a lot. You should have a back button though

PhiTuS responds:

oh, right. i didn't feel like i needed a back button while presenting this in class.

[Super EDD bros EWCF]

Effort shown

It may not have been animated well, but this is your second flash and if you keep going you can only get better

SunBlitz responds:

thanks man im glad there are helpful people ^_^ i am going to contiune an make new flashes but it wont be edd style .... i have a few ideas that im going to try but untill then ^_^ thanks

[The World Warrior]

Out of synch

It seemed more out of synch than I thought possible. Did you set the audio to stream when you were working??? You should improve the audio quality of the flash when you export it.

R-Taco responds:

I don't know how to sync the audio any more than I did. If you could PM me and tell me how it'd be greatly appreciated.

[Not The Puppy!]

minature lol

Work on facial expressions, they look not as angry as they sound/annoyed/etc.
Or maybe I've just seen to many overexaggerated expressions on newgrounds lately

TX2 responds:

Terrene was re-voiced after the cartoon was animated, so her expressions don't quite match. As for the others, I stand by the faces I originally drew.