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Wasn't that funny

But I still liked it. I laughed when the guy just shot him three times and he still has perfect aim and shoots him, but the lip-syncing was sloppy, I could tell it was just a movie clip for some parts. The part where he's on the boat doesn't make any sense whatsoever and the part where there's just talking with some black text could have just been really fast scenes or something more interesting

rodstew2 responds:

The boat scene is making fun of one of the last scenes in the actual movie where he reads Hannibal's letter on a boat for some reason then tosses it off.

I like the idea but...

While it was nice and all, there seemed to be no coherence which would seem like it should be the main theme of the collab since it involves a continuing song. Even the song itself, it didn't seem to transition well from one song to another, they felt so distant it was like they aren't part of the same song.

Rig responds:

That's something I plan to address for the next one. ;P

Didn't like it

Your character's seemed to be talking to themselves because only one character was always present at one time except for 1 or 2 scenes. The swearing seemed forced in some parts.

Dave-Flinch-Price responds:

The swearing seems forced in the game too. Play the game - then understand.

Interesting

Your interface was a bit week though, the buttons should have a black background behind the words so they are easier to press. This is basically just a flash version of a powerpoint presentation, and it was hard to navigate. I felt like this could have covered more states too, but I don't know if you'd go above the file size that way

PlayTheGame responds:

i under stand what your saying about the buttons, and yes if i went tall 50 states without any music at all, it would be quite boring

Lost sense of what was happening

You need to a background, or at least some ground so people can understand what is going on. Animation was nice. A play button would have been nice too, and something that tells you you reached the end

sunTyro responds:

well... one broblem is i don't know howto make that play button thats why i use forward play button. well thanks still that score numbes 6.

Ok I guess

You need to make the ball squish in a little bit to seem like its bouncing more, but then again I don't know if soccer balls really do that. The sun is nice, but the clouds seem to be lacking a shape. You should make the ball and the clouds a movie clip so that way the clouds won't look like they're teleporting at the end of the flash by making the whole animation one frame with movie clips

eewawoowa responds:

Soccer balls don't squish when they bounce. I did make the clouds and ball movie clips by the way.

Pretty good

Quality is not the best since its converted, but the animation is nice and smooth, pretty funny too

Helldiver450 responds:

Yea... Hey how do you get Flash Pro for free? I dont have any money to buy Flash Pro and my parents will always say no to it.

Uh...

I'm disturbed

Caecilius responds:

You should inform a professional. Although I'm flattered you'd come to me with your problems.

Good

You make the sprites yourself?
I thought the movie was really slow until I lowered the quality

NintendoFlash responds:

Yup.

Nice animation

I think you need a preloader or something, it goes straight to the play button at the beginning. Voice spoke a little to fast and too much pop in the mic.

KFoxyFox responds:

I don't actually know how to make a pre-loader, and that has been bugging me for a while now. I ought to look it up sometime.

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