Chickenfork's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The CTSG Collab!]

I like the idea but...

While it was nice and all, there seemed to be no coherence which would seem like it should be the main theme of the collab since it involves a continuing song. Even the song itself, it didn't seem to transition well from one song to another, they felt so distant it was like they aren't part of the same song.

Rig responds:

That's something I plan to address for the next one. ;P

[Alone in the Dork]

Didn't like it

Your character's seemed to be talking to themselves because only one character was always present at one time except for 1 or 2 scenes. The swearing seemed forced in some parts.

Dave-Flinch-Price responds:

The swearing seems forced in the game too. Play the game - then understand.

[fighting man (suntyro)]

Lost sense of what was happening

You need to a background, or at least some ground so people can understand what is going on. Animation was nice. A play button would have been nice too, and something that tells you you reached the end

sunTyro responds:

well... one broblem is i don't know howto make that play button thats why i use forward play button. well thanks still that score numbes 6.

[football/soccer ball]

Ok I guess

You need to make the ball squish in a little bit to seem like its bouncing more, but then again I don't know if soccer balls really do that. The sun is nice, but the clouds seem to be lacking a shape. You should make the ball and the clouds a movie clip so that way the clouds won't look like they're teleporting at the end of the flash by making the whole animation one frame with movie clips

eewawoowa responds:

Soccer balls don't squish when they bounce. I did make the clouds and ball movie clips by the way.

[Stickman Chicken]

Pretty good

Quality is not the best since its converted, but the animation is nice and smooth, pretty funny too

Helldiver450 responds:

Yea... Hey how do you get Flash Pro for free? I dont have any money to buy Flash Pro and my parents will always say no to it.

[All Quiet on theShoreline]

Uh...

I'm disturbed

Caecilius responds:

You should inform a professional. Although I'm flattered you'd come to me with your problems.

[The Legend of Korah Ch 1]

Good

You make the sprites yourself?
I thought the movie was really slow until I lowered the quality

NintendoFlash responds:

Yup.

[The Greedy Fox]

Nice animation

I think you need a preloader or something, it goes straight to the play button at the beginning. Voice spoke a little to fast and too much pop in the mic.

KFoxyFox responds:

I don't actually know how to make a pre-loader, and that has been bugging me for a while now. I ought to look it up sometime.