Chickenfork's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Random Mario Shorts]

Choppy

Use tween easing to give a more gravity feeling when mario jumps. The framerate was pretty low and made the whole thing seem sluggish. You have to work on the objects you just drew yourself like the portal gun or the flames. You should use blur for something like that

[We Must Fight]

Loved it

Too short is a lie, its fine. I kinda get sick of seeing the left-right-left-right-etc. formula though, it gets really boring

[Enviorment fight]

Kinda slow, but good

What do you mean you can't really download anything? Is it because you can't find the sounds or your computer has problems?
I bet if you just increased the frame rate, the animation would be faster without losing quality due to the animation being all tweens. The flip effect does look awful though, just take the time to draw the character again facing forwards for turns, you only need to do that twice, one for each character anyways

[fighting man (suntyro)]

Lost sense of what was happening

You need to a background, or at least some ground so people can understand what is going on. Animation was nice. A play button would have been nice too, and something that tells you you reached the end

sunTyro responds:

well... one broblem is i don't know howto make that play button thats why i use forward play button. well thanks still that score numbes 6.

[football/soccer ball]

Ok I guess

You need to make the ball squish in a little bit to seem like its bouncing more, but then again I don't know if soccer balls really do that. The sun is nice, but the clouds seem to be lacking a shape. You should make the ball and the clouds a movie clip so that way the clouds won't look like they're teleporting at the end of the flash by making the whole animation one frame with movie clips

eewawoowa responds:

Soccer balls don't squish when they bounce. I did make the clouds and ball movie clips by the way.

[Stickman Chicken]

Pretty good

Quality is not the best since its converted, but the animation is nice and smooth, pretty funny too

Helldiver450 responds:

Yea... Hey how do you get Flash Pro for free? I dont have any money to buy Flash Pro and my parents will always say no to it.

[All Quiet on theShoreline]

Uh...

I'm disturbed

Caecilius responds:

You should inform a professional. Although I'm flattered you'd come to me with your problems.

[The Legend of Korah Ch 1]

Good

You make the sprites yourself?
I thought the movie was really slow until I lowered the quality

NintendoFlash responds:

Yup.