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Interesting

Your interface was a bit week though, the buttons should have a black background behind the words so they are easier to press. This is basically just a flash version of a powerpoint presentation, and it was hard to navigate. I felt like this could have covered more states too, but I don't know if you'd go above the file size that way

PlayTheGame responds:

i under stand what your saying about the buttons, and yes if i went tall 50 states without any music at all, it would be quite boring

Choppy

Use tween easing to give a more gravity feeling when mario jumps. The framerate was pretty low and made the whole thing seem sluggish. You have to work on the objects you just drew yourself like the portal gun or the flames. You should use blur for something like that

Loved it

Too short is a lie, its fine. I kinda get sick of seeing the left-right-left-right-etc. formula though, it gets really boring

Great parts

Sound was off during the later half of the movie though and was pretty hard to watch with that happening. The effects of stick animations are still top though

Kinda slow, but good

What do you mean you can't really download anything? Is it because you can't find the sounds or your computer has problems?
I bet if you just increased the frame rate, the animation would be faster without losing quality due to the animation being all tweens. The flip effect does look awful though, just take the time to draw the character again facing forwards for turns, you only need to do that twice, one for each character anyways

Lost sense of what was happening

You need to a background, or at least some ground so people can understand what is going on. Animation was nice. A play button would have been nice too, and something that tells you you reached the end

sunTyro responds:

well... one broblem is i don't know howto make that play button thats why i use forward play button. well thanks still that score numbes 6.

Ok I guess

You need to make the ball squish in a little bit to seem like its bouncing more, but then again I don't know if soccer balls really do that. The sun is nice, but the clouds seem to be lacking a shape. You should make the ball and the clouds a movie clip so that way the clouds won't look like they're teleporting at the end of the flash by making the whole animation one frame with movie clips

eewawoowa responds:

Soccer balls don't squish when they bounce. I did make the clouds and ball movie clips by the way.

Pretty good

Quality is not the best since its converted, but the animation is nice and smooth, pretty funny too

Helldiver450 responds:

Yea... Hey how do you get Flash Pro for free? I dont have any money to buy Flash Pro and my parents will always say no to it.

Uh...

I'm disturbed

Caecilius responds:

You should inform a professional. Although I'm flattered you'd come to me with your problems.

Good

You make the sprites yourself?
I thought the movie was really slow until I lowered the quality

NintendoFlash responds:

Yup.

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