It's just longer
It just seems like a deluxe version of your original animation
which you told us already though
It's just longer
It just seems like a deluxe version of your original animation
which you told us already though
Rough
You should make the lines thinner when you draw things, and lines that show speed should be just thick lines, if you use the paint brush tool to draw them, they'll come out crooked. The lip synching should have some tweening involved so it looks more like the mouth is moving, more keyframe animation would work too.
Hard to hear the voices
Voices were hard to hear compared to the rest of the sound effects
Ep. 1/2?
That was pretty good. Some voice acting might have made it less boring though. And thanks for not making the whole thing like an rpg battle
Unexpected
The art made me think this was going to suck, i was totally blown away by the great animating
Boring
You should animate the flames instead of having just static images
Increase the framerate
Too choppy framerate.
Try to do more than tweening a mouth to do lip-synching
Too short
I really shouldn't be complaining about this but it really was short. I never put credits though so don't worry
Great
As good as the last one
Lobster
Age 32, Male
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Joined on 2/23/08